Sweet silence

Sweet silence

The silence punctuated with nervous anticipation, unbounded happiness, joyful expectations and fearful of the fading moment becoming today’s memory. Let me look into those eyes once more, devoid of regret, let me see the future become history, my destiny stripped naked and bare, exposed to the vulture of fate. Allow me the luxury of your presence just once more so that my desire for that oneness escapes, if only for a moment. My eyes, your eyes...speak sweetly, silently, conveying feelings unearthed, and renewed with hope, despair and excitement, but nurtured with sincerity and devotion: an emotion erupting with innocence and spontaneity reserved for more deserving souls.  My eyes, your eyes speak sweetly. 

The above post makes no sense whatsoever ... riddled with contradictions.

Kwami my fren. Isn't life a contradiction? Aren't you, by extension, a contradiction? Why worry...so it was, so it will be.

However that said: Please point to me what doesn't make sense, perhaps I can assist you in understanding the subtleties.

Peace!

How things  SCA?. The part that I  don't understand is where it says that the eyes speak sweetly  Eyes don't talk .

[quote author=Kwami link=topic=103771.msg689559#msg689559 date=1460735444]
How things  SCA?. The part that I  don't understand is where it says that the eyes speak sweetly  Eyes don't talk .


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Busy bro...never been busier...and it ain't slowing down...crunch time. Hope you are taking care of yourself...everytime remind yourself: THERE IS ONLY ONE OF ME and PLENTY OF THEM (whatever that is) LOL

Metaphorically???

This is a bit abstract and you know, I don't have to like the text but I, as writer, a poet, have to give respect to every possible style. The metaphor, pleonasm, oxymoron and many other are considered to be wrong in everyday speaking and in essay writing but in poetry and fiction they are considered to be rhetorical figure or figure of speech.

Remember Paul Simon and the SOUND of SILENCE?

So eyes cannot speak according to medical standards but they can show emotions and feelings that you might have and if you write that they speak every sane person should know what this means.

[quote author=djordjem87 link=topic=103771.msg689603#msg689603 date=1460744692]
    every sane person should know what this means.
[/quote] Not all of us are sane

[quote author=Kwami link=topic=103771.msg689604#msg689604 date=1460744897]
Not all of us are sane
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I never said tat I was sane...sanity, what does that mean?

[quote author=SCA link=topic=103771.msg689623#msg689623 date=1460748712]
I never said tat I was sane...sanity, what does that mean?
[/quote] The topic is about silence and at this time I plead the fifth .. The right to remain silent

[quote author=Kwami link=topic=103771.msg689624#msg689624 date=1460749073]
The topic is about silence and at this time I plead the fifth .. The right to remain silent
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LOL  so do I ....that is why Ketchie goaded me to post.